that was quite good. don't forget to spell/grammar check before you send it in! (i only spotted two though, so don't worry) DEfinitely answers what's being asked, but if you want comments a little more nit-picky, you could try delving into the Europe as a melting pot vs. US as a salad bowl aspect. I thought it was very interesting. Personally, I think EUrope is far more diverse than America, but that's just me. You hear far more languages spoken here than in NY, I think and race is more integrated into culture and ethnicity, if you know what I mean.
Just touch a little more on that diff between sicilian and italan and you're pretty much done.
Otherwise, if you need to send it in stat, it's fine the way it is.
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Date: 2005-04-13 11:37 am (UTC)Just touch a little more on that diff between sicilian and italan and you're pretty much done.
Otherwise, if you need to send it in stat, it's fine the way it is.